Friday 30 October 2015
Recount Scaffold.
It was a good weekend.
Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels
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WOW!!! i was so excited when we had a race competition Niko and Navid and Rohullah. we all had a race. Niko came 1st and I came 2nd Navid came 3nd Rohullah came 4nd. After the race we went to the shops to buy lollies. After the lollies we went home to watch movies at Navid’s house.
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Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How
Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs
Write in the past tense
Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings
Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia
Use connectives
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After the movie we went to the park the to play soccer Navid and I we vs Niko and Rohullah. Me and Navid won the soccer. Me and Navid was so happy and excited. After the soccer we all played handball Niko and Rohullah vs me and Navid. Me and Navid lost because we had 13 goal and Niko and Rohullah had 16 goal. After we all went back home.
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Conclusion
Sums up how you felt about the experience.
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The end we went home to sleep.
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Writing
Wednesday 28 October 2015
Doubles poster By Najib.
Today i lent how to make a doubles. Doubles is something you add twice.
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Maths
Thinking Groups.
This is my Thinking groups me and Avalon and Brooklyn we work on this.
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Maths
Sunday 25 October 2015
Friday 23 October 2015
Recount Scaffold
This is my Recount on my weekend.
Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels
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WOW!!!!! I was so happy I played soccer with my friends. It was an exciting day. I won the game of soccer and also Navid. Next we played handball. I lost the game Rohullah and Frank won the game.
But Rohullah was so happy and Frank.
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Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How
Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs
Write in the past tense
Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings
Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia
Use connectives
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When Frank and Rohullah finished cheering all had a big race.
I was the winner of the race. After the race we went back home. And we ate some halal chicken burger. After the burger we rode our bikes to the park. After the race we went home to sleep.
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Conclusion
Sums up how you felt about the experience.
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Writing
Wednesday 21 October 2015
Thinking Groups By Najib
Today we have been doing thinking groups are learning was smiley faces .
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Maths
Tuesday 20 October 2015
Hedgehog Fun By Najib
Today I learnt how to make a fruit hedgehog. A fruit hedgehog has an orange as it's base. The skewers are used as it's prickles. I had to create my own hedgehog by using Google Drawing. I had to pick my own favourite foods such as: strawberries, pineapple, kiwifruit, celery and marshmellows.
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Reading
Monday 19 October 2015
My Recount about my weekend
In the weekend I went to my friend’s house we played soccer with Frank and Navid and Rohullah.
It was a good day Navid got 6 goal, Rohullah got 5 goal, I had 6 goal, Frank had 5 goal. I had a good day with my friend’s. The end we went home.
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Writing
Friday 16 October 2015
Wednesday 14 October 2015
Monday 12 October 2015
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