This is my XtraMaths I got 13 right and I got 3 wrong.
Friday, 6 November 2015
My recount By Najib.
WOW! On Monday we went to the hall to see Duffy. Duffy was so funny. The girl didn't like books, school and homework. Duffy and Siena were telling the girl to read books. The girl didn't like books she liked looking at
TV. After Siena told the girl to read books and the girl she read books and she didn't like wash TV. Duffy an Siena tell the girl to read books. After that the girl like books and she came to the library to get books.
When she opened a book the book to her to a new world. Then she opened another book and in that book there was a gardening fairy with fruits in her hat and the fairy was throwing fruits at everyone and accidentally she threw a fruits at the girl's face and the fairy was really funny and then the girl closed the book but the girl could still see the fairy. Then the girl broke the library card but the fairy said “I am not in the card, I am in your mind”.
I had a great time with the people in the show. That was a great experiences.
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Wednesday, 4 November 2015
Tuesday, 3 November 2015
Recount Scaffold.
This is my Recount Scaffold.
Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels
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WOW!!!!! I was so happy I played soccer with my friends. It was an exciting day. I won the game of soccer and also Navid. Next we played handball. I lost the game. Rohullah and Frank won the game.
Rohullah was so happy.
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Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How
Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs
Write in the past tense
Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings
Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia
Use connectives
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When Frank and Rohullah finished cheering we all had a big race.
I was the winner of the race. After the race we went back home. We ate some halal chicken burger. After the burger we rode our bikes to the park. After the race we went home to sleep.
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Conclusion
Sums up how you felt about the experience.
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Writing
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