Revising writing.

Miss Paton’s copy

Miss Paton has a cat. His name is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house  hungry. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.

Najib's copy

Miss Paton has a cat named Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house hungry Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He hates my laptop computer and would rather sit on my lap. Oscar he like a attention. would like me to give him the attention.