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Introduction
State what you are arguing about
State your opinion
For or Against
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My Argument is
have a swimming pool at Panmure Bridge School. We are for having a swimming at Panmure bridge school because it provides skills for the kids. |
Reason 1
learning
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We like swimming pool because you can learn how to swim and you can be good at swimming. In the Swimming pool you can have a racing competition with your friends in the Swimming pool,
and you could also play in the swimming pool. Swimming is good for your body to get lots of exercise, I like swimming because you can learn better.
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Reason 2
Playing with friends
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In the holidays some swimming pool might be closed. Instead of waiting for the pools to open you could come to the Panmure Bridge School swimming pool and have fun playing with your friends and your family.
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Reason 3
family
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If you don’t spend time with your family you can got to the Panmure Bridge School swimming pool and swim together. Your family will have a great time if you come and swim on the holidays at Panmure Bridge School.
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Conclusion
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Therefore I think their should be a swimming pool at Panmure Bridge School because it helps us to learnt swimming. Also you can have games with your friends.
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Monday, 14 September 2015
By Najib and AungNaing My Argument on should we have a swimming pool.
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