It was a good weekend.
Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels
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WOW!!! i was so excited when we had a race competition Niko and Navid and Rohullah. we all had a race. Niko came 1st and I came 2nd Navid came 3nd Rohullah came 4nd. After the race we went to the shops to buy lollies. After the lollies we went home to watch movies at Navid’s house.
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Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How
Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs
Write in the past tense
Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings
Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia
Use connectives
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After the movie we went to the park the to play soccer Navid and I we vs Niko and Rohullah. Me and Navid won the soccer. Me and Navid was so happy and excited. After the soccer we all played handball Niko and Rohullah vs me and Navid. Me and Navid lost because we had 13 goal and Niko and Rohullah had 16 goal. After we all went back home.
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Conclusion
Sums up how you felt about the experience.
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The end we went home to sleep.
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